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Nici
Junior Member

since 1999-08-16

Posts 22
Hastings, New Zealand

0 posted 1999-08-17 11:21 PM

ONLY IN MY DREAMS....

If only I could look at him
without having to turn away.
I would look directly in his eyes
and he would do the same.

If only I could talk to him
and find the words to say.
I'd tell him that I love him
and he would do the same.

But this is only in my dreams,
in my dreams is where I feel safe.
I can be whoever I want to be
I can hide in my own little place.

In real life I'm lonely,
I'm longing to be loved.
The guy I've given my heart to,
hasn't returned that love.

His actions make me love him,
his words make me melt
but still his heart he has not shared,
his love I have not felt.

Does one give up all hope from here
and start to live again?
Or can I go on hoping,
for my love it does remain.

So instead of admitting defeat,
giving room for my heart to break,
I retreat back to my hiding place,
my dream where I'll feel safe.

I can be whoever I want to be
I can do whatever I please
But most of all I feel loved
And that puts my heart at ease.

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REMEMBER......"All our dreams can come true if we have the courage to pursue them!"

[This message has been edited by Nici (edited 08-18-99).]

NaTaLy
Junior Member

since 1999-08-16

Posts 43
brooklyn,ny,usa

1 posted 1999-08-17 11:30 PM

i can see your shy and you have a guy you like but you cant bring yourself to tell him.its ok,ive had my heart broken a dozen times. ts better to keep a dream just a dream and a fantacy just a fantasy~

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n.m.

Nici
Junior Member

since 1999-08-16

Posts 22
Hastings, New Zealand

2 posted 1999-08-17 11:33 PM

Thanx for being for the reply.
I was scared that I was going to get a
YOU STINK!!

CrAyZeD
Junior Member

since 1999-08-03

Posts 45

3 posted 1999-08-17 11:41 PM

I am goin through the same thing except im a guy and the girl wont return the love. It does stink!!! NOT THE POEM but the situation we are in.

If you want a tip my best tip would be to organize the poem better. Organize it into sections so the reader can get the rythm that u dictate. Other then that good work

Nici
Junior Member

since 1999-08-16

Posts 22
Hastings, New Zealand

4 posted 1999-08-17 11:49 PM

Thanx for the reply!!
I was thinking about how to organise it when I was typing it out but I didn't really know how - anyway thanx for the tip - I'll try it again!

Piggy169
Junior Member

since 1999-08-20

Posts 10
Belleville IL USA

5 posted 1999-08-20 12:58 PM

i was in the same situation for the longest time, i moved on and found somone else it didn't work out between me and the other person and the day we broke up the orignol gave me a call and told me how much he really cared. the point is not to make him jeolese but move on do what you got to do and if it was meant to be it will work out ohh sorry about my spelling i know its real bad

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