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The love I've always wanted
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The love I've always wanted |
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Sunflower Junior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 14Front Royal, VA, USA |
I reach inside my soul Indeed... I have found who I want I look deep into my heart What will he say? I pray for the courage To ask a simple question What will he respond? What will he say? We talk, we flirt He's having a good day My hands are sweaty from fear I love this boy He asks me a question I say yes, why not in reply when my heart is yearning to say I love you The love I've always wanted I have found He is perfect He is profound What will happen I do not know I can only hope, pray One day he will know the truth of my love he will know that he is the love I've always wanted ------------------ Sita aka Sunflower sunflower_sita@ hotmail.com |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
IF your love is true, there's no need for words to express it. I remember I had these lines in one of my poems; "I know our love is true We share a strong connection Not cause I always stare at you Because we stare in one direction" I liked your poem! ------------------ I fell in love and kept on falling |
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katrina Junior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 41White Bear Lake, Minnesota, U.S.A |
Your poem is wonderful! I know what it is like to be so much in love. good job and I hope everything works out for you with your love interest. |
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Sunflower Junior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 14Front Royal, VA, USA |
Hi! Thank you for the compliments! To Master...your little stanza was true... indeed words need not express true love.... *smiles* To Katrina...I'm glad someone knows how it feels. This poem was based on two boys... *smiles* Oh well! Thanks! ------------------ Sita aka Sunflower sunflower_sita@ hotmail.com |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Your words certainly hit home for me, Sunflower. I felt this exact way before I just went on ahead and told him how I felt. *smiles*. Love is a wonderful thing...great work!!! ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "If I could be an angel, I'd make your every wish come true. But I am only human, just a woman lovin' you..." Trisha Yearwood |
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