my newest poem...1 for the records

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Teen Poetry #1

my newest poem...1 for the records

Mike1sacks
Member

since 1999-07-24

Posts 103
Bklyn ny,usa

0 posted 1999-08-14 04:51 AM

the rain hits the fire escape...
and its telling me ur name
every thing i hear tells me
nothin will ever be the same
we were one but lets forget the past
u and him are 1 and forever u will last

its been 11 months since u left me
i know i sound obsessed but i love u
and i dont belive u can ever lose true love
maybe it wasnt true to u,but it was to me
u say im to blind to see the truth,
no im not,its jus that reality isnt always my truth
look wat u have done to me...i treat women like shit
i bet on how long till i score with girl # 25
u know wat,i never told u this....u wer #1

MikeSacks
P.s. im sorry it takes me so long to post...i get everythin cpywrited b4 i do

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I'm not a poet!!,E.A.Poe was a poet.
I'm jus a person who likes to show off his writnig to ppl...but i can never call my slef a poet...its a dream not reality

Mike1Sacks@aol.com

Starr_Scott
Junior Member

since 1999-08-06

Posts 26
Brownwood, Texas, USA

1 posted 1999-08-14 04:11 PM

That was a great poem! The best yet I think.
You have great ideas and you write your thoughts really well. Keep it up.
~~~STARR~~~:-)

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Mike1sacks
Member

since 1999-07-24

Posts 103
Bklyn ny,usa

2 posted 1999-08-14 08:36 PM

thanx

Jimmy
Junior Member

since 1999-07-17

Posts 42
Oak Grove

3 posted 1999-08-14 10:28 PM

that was a great poem.
i loved it

Tanya
Junior Member

since 1999-07-26

Posts 43
Brooklyn, NY, USA

4 posted 1999-08-15 01:27 AM

You poem was really nice, and very sweet.
<333Tanya<333

Former DeadPoet
Junior Member

since 1999-08-01

Posts 16

5 posted 1999-08-16 03:08 AM

Im not a mean person either. I dont see any harm in what I have done. I posted it for HER to criticize, too bad you cant really read, or write.

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Have a nice day and smile! =)

Mike1sacks
Member

since 1999-07-24

Posts 103
Bklyn ny,usa

6 posted 1999-08-16 03:51 AM

I dont mind wen an idiot critisining me

NaTaLy
Junior Member

since 1999-08-16

Posts 43
brooklyn,ny,usa

7 posted 1999-08-16 10:45 PM

i think your spoiled little rich boy whos only emotions come out of your butt.

Former DeadPoet
Junior Member

since 1999-08-01

Posts 16

8 posted 1999-08-17 05:27 PM

Sounds like Nataly and I are the only ones with taste.

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Have a nice day and smile! =)

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