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I miss you!! |
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Ashlie693 Junior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 25 |
Its not that I can't live without you, Its that I dont even want to try I realize the mistake I made The first time I said goodbye We've been through so much since then And right now I want to be where you are I just can't seem to let this go We've already been this far It makes it even harder I can't understand the reason you had How could your love for me just disappear God, I wish I didnt need you this bad I dont know how this got so confusing But I want to set it right I love you baby, and I want you to know You are the best thing in my life We can make this work Love will help us through i just dont feel complete unless I am next to you Please come back to me I want to trust the way I feel We were meant to be And this love we have is real Dedicated to my ex b/f..John..who dumped me over very DUMB circumstances!!! |
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Jimmy Junior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 42Oak Grove |
i love this poem |
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LuvrGurl New Member
since 1999-08-14
Posts 1Grand Rapids, Michigan, USA |
This was a pretty good poem, except a lot of the lines came from a Backstreet Boys song called, "Back to Your Heart." I just thought I'd mention that. |
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Ashlie693 Junior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 25 |
I didnt know that....I dont listen to Backstreet Boys..but what lines are copied? I will change the poem...dont wanna plaguerise (however u spell it) -Ashes |
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