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Teen Poetry #1

When it tears you apart.

cclccfe
New Member

since 1999-08-10

Posts 2

0 posted 1999-08-10 02:40 AM

I don't know how it started,
Or why it matters so much,
All I want is you right by me,
I love your tender touch.

I've never cared like this,
and it really hurts a bunch,
The tears run down my face,
I'm not understanding it too much.

For a reason I'm unsure,
You got off the phone,
Now I want to hear your voice,
I'm feeling so alone.

You won't call back,
You were the one to let me go,
Did I do something wrong?
I really want to know.

This could be so good,
Like it is it doesn't have to be.
I'm sorry about when I bitch,
But can't you just stand by me.

I put up with your shit,
Only because it is you,
It's not all my fault,
Have you thought it's you too.

I sometimes hate the way you make me feel,
No one else hurts me,
As bad as you,
One day maybe you will see.

I cry so much more htan you know,
Like this you can't see me,
I can't breath and lose control,
Why can't you be nice even to me.

I would put you before anything,
But me, I wait in line,
Tell me if I close,
Or just wasting my time.

I need you here,
I need your touch,
Can't you just be happy with me,
And cut back on the fuss.

I wish I could make you happy,
But I am just me,
This weekend your going away,
To get so trashed you could barely see.

Probably enough to forget my name,
I wish you know How I felt,
Your so much more than just a guy,
You're the one who makes my heart melt.

But you hide stuff I'll never know,
Who knows what it will be,
Your getting ready to dump me,
This for some reason I see.

I wish I knew what I could do,
But for now I will just cry,
I'm sure your wait till after prom,
And this time it will be you saying good bye.

Tell me when you realize it,
Tell me when you care,
You mean the world to me,
But you are causing my heart to tear!!

<3I Love You<3!!

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CCLCCFE

Starr_Scott
Junior Member

since 1999-08-06

Posts 26
Brownwood, Texas, USA

1 posted 1999-08-10 04:40 PM

Great poem! It's what every person goes through at one point or another.
Well keep it up, your a good poet and we need more poems like this.

STARR

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