Love (Please post comments, what would be a better title?)

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Love (Please post comments, what would be a better title?)

Misty
Member

since 1999-08-01

Posts 121
USA

0 posted 1999-08-04 09:55 PM

This is just a short and simple poem,
one of my first! Please comment on it, and tell me of a better title for it!
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LOVE
Love is a special thing
it comes with time
All the money in the world
couldn't buy true love
not even worth a dime
Beautiful like a dove
It's the way you feel
It's eternal happiness
When you find the one you want
And your heart they still

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©Misty

Misty
Member

since 1999-08-01

Posts 121
USA

1 posted 1999-08-05 08:48 PM

Please comment if you read this!

Psycodillica
Junior Member

since 1999-08-04

Posts 28
Lapeer,Mi,USA

2 posted 1999-08-05 09:03 PM

I think this is very good first... I don't think you need another title. The one you have picked is good... It's not the title that is important any... It's the poem it's self...and I for one enjoyed This poem...

Keep up the good work.!!

Misty
Member

since 1999-08-01

Posts 121
USA

3 posted 1999-08-06 09:28 PM

Thanks! i'll keep that title, your right!

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©Misty

doritos
Junior Member

since 1999-07-31

Posts 21

4 posted 1999-08-07 05:30 AM

simple titles are much better. you're poem's cute and your title's nice

Capulet[R+J]
Junior Member

since 1999-08-07

Posts 41
Calgary,Alberta Canada

5 posted 1999-08-07 05:43 PM

Hey,

Well, I like it. It's short and sweet.
I call em 'Bite size' poems.

Anyway, I think the title is fine, but you know, some times, you don't even need a title. It lets other people who read it wander and think about it.

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Love can be searched for in Infinity, Found within Eternity,.. Lost within Seconds..

Misty
Member

since 1999-08-01

Posts 121
USA

6 posted 1999-08-10 03:08 PM

THANKS! Thanks alot you guys

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©Misty
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