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Capulet[R+J]
Junior Member

since 1999-08-07

Posts 41
Calgary,Alberta Canada

0 posted 1999-08-09 04:27 PM

Pure was this tear that fell so deeply
onto my skin,
Falling from these eyes of heaven, that
washes away my sin.
To never feel your kiss again, comes pain
of which I never knew,
In sadness do my eyes begin to follow,
to catch a glimpse of a love that once
was true.
I fear you will never miss my touch, of
kisses in the night,
Never long to call my name, in the
whispers of the light.
Here I sit, a naked child, watching love
be swept away,
Here I sit, a naked boy, as you leave
with no words to say.
Pure was this tear that falls lightly
into my hands,
tears that fall from heavens eyes,
to the sound of the angels dance.
I watch as you gather strength to leave,
not to look into my eyes,
I watch as you close this door on us,
my lonliess to be the price.
I fall to my kness and grasp what is true,
the sounds of silence taunt me swiftly,
of our laughter which once I knew.
Pure was this tear that falls silently
from my eyes,
but pure no more from stains of hatred
in my crys.

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Love can be searched for in Infinity, Found within Eternity,.. Lost within Seconds..

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

1 posted 1999-08-31 02:50 AM

So very painful...yet beautifully written, Capulet.

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*Krista Knutson*

I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller

*~*butterfly*~*
Junior Member

since 1999-07-26

Posts 28
minnesota

2 posted 1999-09-01 10:32 PM

that was sooooo beautiful, i LOVE it. its so sad but so beautiful!!!! what can i say you poem is just BEAUTIFUL!!! nice work & keep it up k

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*~*butterfly*~*

Capulet[R+J]
Junior Member

since 1999-08-07

Posts 41
Calgary,Alberta Canada

3 posted 1999-09-03 11:39 AM

Thankyou Butterfly

roxane
Senior Member

since 1999-09-02

Posts 505
us

4 posted 1999-09-03 03:15 PM

what a sweet beautiful poem...and incredibly sad. i loved it

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"come night come darkness for you cannot come too soon or stay too long in such a place as this" dickens

The Keeper Of Keys
Junior Member

since 1999-09-02

Posts 39

5 posted 1999-09-03 06:01 PM

Superb!!! That was so well written, jealousy overwhelms me yet nothing can hold back my praising your work. It was 'tres bien'. Check my stuff out and tell me what you think...

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~^~^~The Keeper Of Keys~^~^~

Mike Pickering
Junior Member

since 1999-09-03

Posts 18
Redlands, CA, USA

6 posted 1999-09-03 10:05 PM

this touched me more than you can ever know.

[This message has been edited by Mike Pickering (edited 09-03-99).]

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