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Casanova
Junior Member
since 1999-06-21
Posts 48
Mays Landing NJ

0 posted 1999-06-23 11:24 AM


Why rush it???
Don't push, don't move quickly.
Make sure that the one time lasts forever.
Hold her close, breath.
Look in her eyes and take her all in.
Look in her eyes, she's beautiful.
Tell her what she means to you.
Ask her what you mean to her.
Touch her.
Move you finger down her face.
Touch her eyes, nose, lips.
Kiss her.
In a way that she knows your here forever.
Don't rush, don't waste it.
Think of this moment, think of her as the most amazing tasting chocolate in the world.
Picture you finally holding that piece of chocolate, you can smell how good it would taste.
This is the greatest tasting chocolate ever.
Do you just gobble it away?
Do you savour it?
Savour it, for it means more when you do.
Savour it, as though it was the only thing that you will ever eat.
Savour this moment with her, for she means that much.
Whisper to her.
Whisper words that make her tremble.
Whisper the only words that she wants to hear.
Whisper, "You mean more to me than life, you make me whole!"
Look into her eyes again, she's perfect.
Why rush it??

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Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
1 posted 2007-11-13 08:04 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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