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Capulet[R+J]
Junior Member

since 1999-08-07

Posts 41
Calgary,Alberta Canada

0 posted 1999-08-07 03:23 PM

Hello, I just signed up today and thought I would post a poem of mine, let me know what you think.

The Earth beneath me shouts its cry
of sadness as I fall to what seems to be
Eternity on my knees..
The tears upon my face fall towards the
ground bathing the streets in Sadness
Where I have fallen..
I bare a shaken hand upon my cheek and gasp
in fear to what I am afraid I can not do.
As I stare blankly and confused at the one I love, I realise that this, the end is true.
I try to reach a hand to touch your sweetnes
one last time before it all becomes a dream,
but the waterfall of fear has stricken
my hands to grasp a wound I can not find.
I try to speak the words of which I am sorry,
but my tears have drained the strength I need to move my lips.
It seemed I had found eternity when I finnaly felt the touch of your hand, but the touch of Ice had grasped tightly upon your skin.
I gatherd the strength to stay awake and hear what you were trying to say, but the blood clogged my mind, and the screams around me
filled the gaps.
I could not help but feel the blame when the
blue upon your lips began to show, and your body to be drained of life, as you stared at me with apologetic eyes.
I can no longer struggle to make sense of what used to be Life, as Darkness cloaks
my open eyes.
I remember few things as I fell towards
the ground,.. that I will always remember you
and the way you made me feel.
That I will always love you, no matter where
death do take us both.

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Love can be searched for in Infinity, Found within Eternity,.. Lost within Seconds..

Alwye

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Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

1 posted 1999-08-09 01:47 AM

Wow, I must say that you have a lot of talent. This is a great piece, I love it.

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*Krista Knutson*

"Your kiss upon my face feels like a brush with grace, baby thats all it takes to take me higher..." SHeDaisy

Capulet[R+J]
Junior Member

since 1999-08-07

Posts 41
Calgary,Alberta Canada

2 posted 1999-08-09 02:08 PM

Thankyou!

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Love can be searched for in Infinity, Found within Eternity,.. Lost within Seconds..

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