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Cosey
Junior Member
since 1999-06-21
Posts 14
To., Ont, Can.

0 posted 1999-06-22 11:56 PM


What i remember that night
traffic
misery
a red light that
went on until forever
and your mouth
hot and wet on my neck
(or was it only the rain?)

© Copyright 1999 Cosey - All Rights Reserved
Cosey
Junior Member
since 1999-06-21
Posts 14
To., Ont, Can.
1 posted 1999-06-23 10:18 PM


Well this poem is rather ridiculous now that i re-read it. But it's something i will never forget
(oooooooooo very mysterious)

Alysia
Junior Member
since 1999-06-26
Posts 35
american falls, idaho usa
2 posted 1999-06-28 08:32 PM


this poem totally makes me think of the greatest fantasy i once had! i have since lived that fantasy, but oh my goodness this poem is the best. bravo!!!

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~ Alysia*

Aprender
Junior Member
since 1999-06-22
Posts 40
Rohill, NJ, USA
3 posted 1999-06-28 10:43 PM


hummmm...very intresting..it's very unique which i like!!!
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