It has no title, but read anyways...

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Teen Poetry #1

It has no title, but read anyways...

Squirly
New Member

since 1999-08-06

Posts 3
Beaverton, Oregon, USA

0 posted 1999-08-06 04:29 AM

*UNTITLED*

My mind is tortured,
believing my heart,
can love no more,
as I grasp for something to hold on to
Pain rips through my body,
tearing my heart,
piece by piece,
and mashing it to a bloody pulp
My soul screams in agony,
from the loss of love,
that has been torn away
I search for it,
finding nothing,
but cold darkness
I drop in despair,
as my mind is tortured again.

Angel
Senior Member

since 1999-07-02

Posts 551
Pennsylvania

1 posted 1999-08-06 12:35 PM

This poem is really deep. I just hope it is not something that you are feeling right now. You have great talent and keep writing.

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