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Olga
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since 1999-07-26
Posts 152
Brooklyn, NY, USA

0 posted 1999-08-02 08:18 PM


Who the **** r u?
To tell me wut to do.
I am not ur personal possession.
And we are not at a therapy session.

Stop treating me like dirt.
Stop making me hurt.
I am not ur slave.
Stop trying to make me behave.

Who the **** are you?
To tell me what to do.
Im not ur girlfriend any more.
Because all you want to do,
Is to score.

Get away from me.
Let me be.
U are absolutely no1 any more to me.

Don’t tell me wut to do.
And don’t say that you love me too.
Get the **** outa here.
Get away from me.

Im not urs
Don’t tell me wut to do.
Who the **** are u?


© Copyright 1999 Olga - All Rights Reserved
Angel
Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551
Pennsylvania
1 posted 1999-08-02 09:40 PM


This is a really cool poem keep up the good work.


Mike1sacks
Member
since 1999-07-24
Posts 103
Bklyn ny,usa
2 posted 1999-08-03 05:36 AM


its scary to think how many of my g/f's would love to say this to me
Olga
Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 152
Brooklyn, NY, USA
3 posted 1999-08-03 02:57 PM


lol
Olga
Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 152
Brooklyn, NY, USA
4 posted 1999-08-06 09:28 AM


Tanya did u read this poem yet?
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