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A Moment To Be Remembered
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A Moment To Be Remembered |
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Aprender Junior Member
since 1999-06-22
Posts 40Rohill, NJ, USA |
Fog fills the sky so I cannot see The waves come crashing near my feet, but I cannot see them The night chill is cold And as I sit in the sand I wonder what to think Is this a happy moment filled with joy Or a time filled with sorrow I am confused about my feelings So I sit, and soak in the moment A moment to be remembered ~July 1998 |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
I have felt like this many times....good job!  ------------------ *Krista Knutson* |
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Whau2251 Junior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 17Hanford,California,U.S.A. |
yeah, as Alwye said, I have also felt this way before. I think many have. Good poem, very relateable. ------------------ *OoOoAudrey AuoOoO* "Music is my life,without it, I would not be alive." |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
another good one to be brought to the front.. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* |
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Seeking77 Junior Member
since 1999-07-09
Posts 24Irvine california |
I feel this way every time I am forced to make a decision...really inspiring poem. |
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Delilah Junior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 36The Wonderful America |
Like so many before me have stated, I have also felt this way MANY TIMES! Wonderful way of expressing what so many people can't find words for. You actually helped me see things in a different light. I loved it! ------------------ Delilah :) |
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