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With out your love
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With out your love |
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Zombie Man Member
since 1999-06-22
Posts 52Va |
Yesterday when I was looking for you. You were nowhere to be found. It felt like my world just stopped. I didn't know what to do without you by my side. My life turned to a living hell. While my soul just walks around in the darkness. I didn't think I could live my life without your love. Could I go on alone. But like everything else, I learned to move on without you. People just thought I was fine by myself. But inside I was crying hoping you would come back. But you don't seem to care. I loved you with all my heart, And I didn't realize I would miss you so much. Now i notice without you I'm nothing. So now you are gone. And I'm all alone sitting in a dark room crying for u to come back to me. So we could be together... forever...... |
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katrina Junior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 41White Bear Lake, Minnesota, U.S.A |
Your poem is very sad. It is so hard to loose someone you love! I really think this poem is good. |
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