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Misty
Member
since 1999-08-01
Posts 121
USA

0 posted 1999-08-04 11:15 PM


Locked up in my shadowy room.
Lying in the silence of darkness.
On a warm summer's night.
Feeling the cold chills of loneliness
run up my spine.
My heart aches with pain of aloness.
The tears of rejection slowly run down my checks.
While thinking of how it feels to be pushed aside.
Feeling afraid to talk my mind,
because someone might be listening,
and be critical with reject.
As I lye I think of what it would be like,
to be like for who I am.
But knowing I never will,
because of the fact that no one cares to know me.
Having all these feelings locked away,
because their's no one to tell them to.
Feeling like exploding,
but all I can do is scream the tears out,
and cry myself to sleep.
With only the warmth of the sheets.
Never knowing any other warmth.
Just a cold shoulder,
and being brushed away.

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©Misty

© Copyright 1999 Misty - All Rights Reserved
Tanya
Junior Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 43
Brooklyn, NY, USA
1 posted 1999-08-04 11:51 PM


That is such a sad poem. If thats the position you are in I wish you lots of luck, I hope everything turns out to the best. Keep the great work up!
<333Tanya<333

Misty
Member
since 1999-08-01
Posts 121
USA
2 posted 1999-08-07 11:11 AM


This is how I did feel, but not anymore because of a great friend i made! Thanks for the comment! i'll keep posten them!
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