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Misty
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since 1999-08-01
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0 posted 1999-08-03 08:39 PM


How Much? You'll Never Know!

how much i loved you, you'll never know.
how much i cared for you, you'll never know.
how much of my time was devoted to you, you'll never know.
how much of my heart you had, you'll never know.
how much i trusted you, you'll never know.
how much i dreamed of you, you'll never know.
but i guess either one of us will know,
because your no longer aroung to find out.
but i know.........
how much i hurt.
how much i cry.
how much pain i feel for you.
how much i lye awake and wonder what could of been.
how much of my heart you still have.
how much i still yern for your tender kisses.
how much i want you back in my life again!
How much?
You'll never know!

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©Misty

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Misty
Member
since 1999-08-01
Posts 121
USA
1 posted 1999-08-04 08:17 PM


Please tell me what else i can do to make this poems better, im in a mental block right now! THANKS!

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©Misty

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