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Addie Anne
Junior Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 46
norman, oklahoma- usa

0 posted 1999-08-03 10:27 AM


star light
star bright
the constalation of orions might
the love that crashed, decayed that night
the dreams that failed us in our flight
words spoken once, i still long to hear
now those words i'll always fear
breaking down the past in whish i clung to
burning the memories to ashes whisch we held to.
star light
star bright
orions corse no longer right
it failed us in our dreams that night
we wronged those things we thought were right
_______________________________

orion was the constalation my X and i always looked to. the night we ended i walked outside and couldn't see orion anymore.

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Angel
Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551
Pennsylvania
1 posted 1999-08-03 03:09 PM


This is a really powerful poem. You are really talented.
Addie Anne
Junior Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 46
norman, oklahoma- usa
2 posted 1999-08-03 03:11 PM


thank you!
i don't know what else to say.

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