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Misty
Member
since 1999-08-01
Posts 121
USA

0 posted 1999-08-02 05:32 PM


You broke my heart
I knew you didn't want me anymore
I could tell by the way we drifted apart
You walked right out the door
didn't even tell me goodbye
You had someone else say it

Im left here all alone to cry
I thought this time we'd surely make it
Guess I was wrong about you
You used to say you loved and cared for me
then you started acting strange, I got the clue
You didn't want me, you left me be

I was afraid this day would come
So I tried talking to over with you
You looked at me like I was dumb
You really hurt me when you didn't listen
So I walked away, you didn't even stop me
You said I did to much Bitc*en
I just didn't want you to leave me

Don't know what really happened to us
We used to be like best friends
Being together was a must
This is how it always ends

Well Im wishing you'll come back
my life is now incomplete
I feel like a part of me is at lack
Im no longer your girl
You meant everything to me
I could care less about the world
cause you were such a big part of my life

Now all I can do is sit here and pray
I guess it must of been my fault
me not ever knowing what to say
When you walked out, my life came to a halt
I'd rather die, then live without you
believe me when I say I didn't want you to go
I've never meet anyone like you
I don't know how to let my true feelings show

Please don't shut me out
I want us together again
Can't you here me shout
For you I'd even sin
That's how much you meant to me
I'll never love anyone like this
I'd give anything for thee
Your the one I'll always yurn for and miss.

By:Misty
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for more poetry by me go to:
http://www.geocities.com/Paris/Arc/1644

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Angel
Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551
Pennsylvania
1 posted 1999-08-03 03:10 PM


This is a really great poem, I really enjoyed it.

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A man loses his sense of direction after four drinks, a woman loses her after four kisses.
-H.L. Mencken

Black Rain
Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 60
California, USA
2 posted 1999-08-03 07:35 PM


This is a great poem, good job.


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"I'm just a girl...standing in front of a boy...asking him to love her." - Notting Hill

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