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Misty
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since 1999-08-01
Posts 121
USA

0 posted 1999-08-02 05:29 PM





You search for just the right song.
A lovers song
You look into my eyes and smile that smile
You gently take my hand in yours and ask,
"May I have this dance."
I smile at your gentlemen ways,
As we dance in a swift rythum
Our hearts pounding for each other
You pull me close
And I rest my head on you shoulder
I feel so safe and comforted in your arms.
I gaze into your dark brown eyes.
I forget where I am,
but your sweet voice brings me back to reality
You softly whisper,
"This is how it should always be."
That's when I knew you did care for me,
I knew my life would never be the same.
As the song ends,
for what seems like eternity,
you hold me close,
No words need to be spoke,
our love speaks out loud.
Nothing could ruin this perfect moment.
But if I only knew,
a couple weeks later
you'd be gone
and this would be
Our Last Dance Together.

By: Misty
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For more poetry By me go to:
http://www.geocities.com/Paris/Arc/1644




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Black Rain
Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 60
California, USA
1 posted 1999-08-05 01:14 AM


How SAD!!! This is a very good poem though....I'll try to visit your site the next chance I get!
black rain

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"I'm just a girl...standing in front of a boy...asking him to love her." - Notting Hill

Psycodillica
Junior Member
since 1999-08-04
Posts 28
Lapeer,Mi,USA
2 posted 1999-08-06 02:10 AM


Nicely done... I am sorry that that happend. Everyday should be lived like it's the last because it just might be. Again I am sorry that you lost someone you cared for.

Psycodillica
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Don't cry because it's over but smile because it happened


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