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V-dog
New Member
since 1999-07-25
Posts 9
Farmville,NC,USA

0 posted 1999-07-30 10:05 PM


It's enough to make a man cry.
To want you so bad as he looks at you though his eyes.

My heart and soul begs to be caressed with your touch.
My mind want to be challenged with your preceptiveness.
My body longs to hold you in my arms so much.
My lips want to kiss your body and nothing less than it.

I can think about you,
Like a distant star that shines so bright,
And the things you do,
all though the night.

If I could have one wish,
So soothing and hole.
It would be a kiss from you lips.
That builds a permanent home in my soul.

See I would like to become much more than friends.
If you let me we can make this lat till the end.

© Copyright 1999 V-dog - All Rights Reserved
*~*butterfly*~*
Junior Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 28
minnesota
1 posted 1999-07-31 12:25 PM


i like this poem, it is written very nicely!! its beautiful really!! i love it!
*later*
~kas~

Olga
Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 152
Brooklyn, NY, USA
2 posted 1999-08-05 11:34 PM


this is a really nice poem. Hope everything works out 4 u

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