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nicnac8
Junior Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 46
New York, N.Y. USA

0 posted 1999-07-30 01:48 AM


He says he loves me,
"but I don't know."
He says he trusts me,
" I guess so."
He says he wants me,
"in which way?"
He says he needs me,
in his bed today.
He says he wants to rub my hips,
He says he wants to taste my lips,
And I let him do so.
We went further,
and it got deeper.
I didn't mean to,
I swear it!
I told him I was pregnant,
but he didn't want to hear it.
I guess what he says isn't always true,
especially when he said
"I love you."

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JellyBean
Junior Member
since 1999-07-29
Posts 24
Durham, CA 95938
1 posted 1999-07-30 11:27 PM


That is SO good! I love it! Unfortunately, what you said is true too often. Very nice, though.
*~*butterfly*~*
Junior Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 28
minnesota
2 posted 1999-07-31 12:18 PM


i really like this poem, it is sooo true. hopefully some girls read this and then maybe they will think twice before going all the way. it was nicely written
*later*
~kas~

nicnac8
Junior Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 46
New York, N.Y. USA
3 posted 1999-07-31 03:51 AM


Thankyou for the reply. I'm really glad u liked it.
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