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Tanya
Junior Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 43
Brooklyn, NY, USA

0 posted 1999-07-28 01:53 AM


<3
Today we were together
I thought you'd always stay
We set there just watching the day
Slowly fade away
I thought that it would never end
But you had to go away
I missed you so much
Just couldnt wait 1 more day just to see you
When you came back to me i thought it was the same
It sure wasn't
You liked it better without me
I didn't know what to say
But now I have realized
The pain will go away

...I hope it will



[This message has been edited by Tanya (edited 07-29-99).]

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DreamEvil
Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-07-28 07:09 AM


Trust me, my dear, it will.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©



Tanya
Junior Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 43
Brooklyn, NY, USA
2 posted 1999-07-28 11:51 PM


thanx
Kiya
Junior Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 31
Kingston Springs,Tn.,U.S.
3 posted 1999-07-29 12:56 PM


Thanks for your reply on my poem. I think I've e-mailed you twice. I'm just now figuring out how to work this. I know that you will find somebody who gives you this inspiration that you never thought you had before. Your poem was very good but also very sad. It reminds me of one of my past boyfriends.




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Kiya Bowermaster


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