Teen Poetry #1 |
i have no title,help me find 1 |
Mike1sacks Member
since 1999-07-24
Posts 103Bklyn ny,usa |
looking for an angel to stop my soul from cryin my heart bleeds lonly i sit in the darkness,waiting for my angel to bring me light to many times it has been taken and crushed the love is true only to my own heart the ohers jus use it as a toy so i sit aloan and cry ------------------ [email protected] |
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Addie Anne Junior Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 46norman, oklahoma- usa |
i have a suggestion for the title.... "the angels let me cry", or "stolen light"! i liked the poem, short and simple, wish i could say sweet but it's not a very lively topic. it hurts to be alone, i know that feeling too well. email me sometime if you'd like to:-) have a great big happy day, addie |
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Sweet T Member
since 1999-06-14
Posts 64mesa, arizona maricopa |
Lost Soals crying |
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Princess Lily Member
since 1999-07-13
Posts 149USA |
First of all--Title suggestion:Crying Soul Second-If i found a guy like you-I would definately be his angel E-Mail me sometime ------------------ We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe *A rose is a rose it withers and dies...so long as you keep it the memories stay alive* [This message has been edited by Princess Lily (edited 07-29-99).] |
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Kiya Junior Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 31Kingston Springs,Tn.,U.S. |
I know that this may sound a little corny but I think "Toy Love" would be a cool title. I mean its your poem so it really doesn't matter. I hope you find your "angel". I'm sure she's looking for you. |
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