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Teen Poetry #1

i hate men

Addie Anne
Junior Member

since 1999-07-22

Posts 46
norman, oklahoma- usa

0 posted 1999-07-27 10:43 AM

it was all a bunch of lies
but i believed
why daddy?!
leaving me in this dark world ,
leaving me to find another to replace you
but i always find someone just like you:
a childish liar, hipocritical of all that is not like you.
why uncle?!
doing what you did,
doing what you know was wrong
and you think i don't remember:
i remember, it has destroyed me
because of you.
why is it falling down?!
the men taking up my time because i think it's true,
i give, i end up dying again
why?! it all comes down to abandonment,
it all comes down to the man leaving.

Former DeadPoet
Junior Member

since 1999-08-01

Posts 16

1 posted 1999-08-01 11:34 PM

Women leave too....trust me, I know.

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Have a nice day and smile! =)

Addie Anne
Junior Member

since 1999-07-22

Posts 46
norman, oklahoma- usa

2 posted 1999-08-02 06:13 PM

yes i know women leave, but i've only experienced male abandonment. my mother is still with me so i can't hate women.
thanks anyways.

Olga
Member

since 1999-07-26

Posts 152
Brooklyn, NY, USA

3 posted 1999-08-02 08:47 PM

I agree wit u. I had da same probs wit my ex dad

Mike1sacks
Member

since 1999-07-24

Posts 103
Bklyn ny,usa

4 posted 1999-08-03 05:38 AM

thanx for hatin me

Addie Anne
Junior Member

since 1999-07-22

Posts 46
norman, oklahoma- usa

5 posted 1999-08-03 10:12 AM

oh hush mike, i can't hate someone i don't know/ lol

Mya15
Junior Member

since 1999-07-19

Posts 16
Sunrise,Fl,33351

6 posted 1999-08-09 10:15 PM

I am sorry that this happend to you and I con't belive that people are being so incencere about this. The reason she doesn't know about women laving is because she has never experienced it. (Duh) Read the poem. So many people handle being in a situation like this in other really negetive ways and I think you are doing okay. I really love your poem and I hope you keep writing.

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