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Teen Poetry #1

I Miss You

Olga
Member

since 1999-07-26

Posts 152
Brooklyn, NY, USA

0 posted 1999-07-27 12:34 PM

I miss you to death,
I love you for life.
But when you're not there,
You just wound my heart with a piercing knife.

How could you leave me?
How could you go?
Maybe this wasn't meant to be,
I just don't know.

I miss you now and always.
Ur the only one I'll neva 4get.
U've changed my life from da moment we've met.

I cry myself to sleep,
Waiting for you to come back.
Will things eva be the same?
Who do I have to blame?

U just went away,
Without any say.
I love you,
And I always will,
U are just that part of me,
Which i can never fill.

Tanya
Junior Member

since 1999-07-26

Posts 43
Brooklyn, NY, USA

1 posted 1999-07-28 01:27 AM

wow olga that is so sweet and who is this poem dedicated to?(yes same question you asked me)

Olga
Member

since 1999-07-26

Posts 152
Brooklyn, NY, USA

2 posted 1999-07-29 01:04 AM

lol, this guy Jarin, i dont think u know him, he lives in Canada now

mike2sacks
Junior Member

since 1999-07-29

Posts 18
brooklyn ny

3 posted 1999-07-29 08:25 AM

Olga ever since i registered for this poetry forum u have ben 1 writer that i really admired....i guess b/c u have 1 of my writing syles...which i cant seem to find since im in a major writers block....You have amazing talent and i hope to 1 day exel with my writing and find the point that u r at

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Olga
Member

since 1999-07-26

Posts 152
Brooklyn, NY, USA

4 posted 1999-07-31 11:32 PM

thank u that was very sweet but i dont think im THAT good.

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