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Sweet T Member
since 1999-06-14
Posts 64mesa, arizona maricopa |
When does love happen without any Pain? When can words have meaning with nothing to Gain? Can a heart hold the emotion that comes from Above? Is there a truth to the word we call Love? They say that true love happens once your whole life, When it happens why does it cut like a Knife? Why is it that everything in life just goes wrong? When the search for your intended has gone on to long? When you find them hold on to them real tight So their love keeps you warm on the coldest of night Their name is a blessing as it rolls of your Mind The words for your emotion are so hard to find What happens when your tears no longer can Fall? Are you destined to be alone after All? What keeps you going when depression sets In? When does the pain stop hurting and you finally WIN?! |
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*~*butterfly*~* Junior Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 28minnesota |
i love this poem, this is how i feel!! your very talented, keep it up!  later* |
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Sweet T Member
since 1999-06-14
Posts 64mesa, arizona maricopa |
Thank you for your kind words. I write my poetry for others to feel. And with you I know that my acheivement has come true. lol always..........Sweet T |
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BLATH New Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 2SINGAPORE |
What an impressive poem! Questioning what true love actually is.well written! |
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Sweet T Member
since 1999-06-14
Posts 64mesa, arizona maricopa |
Thank you. For every person who reads my poetry I become stronger. |
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JellyBean Junior Member
since 1999-07-29
Posts 24Durham, CA 95938 |
Very nice. A lot of people can relate. Keep up the great work! |
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Mike1sacks Member
since 1999-07-24
Posts 103Bklyn ny,usa |
i admire ur poetry greatly and hope to one day be able to write as well as u can |
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Tanya Junior Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 43Brooklyn, NY, USA |
YOU'RE POEM WAS REALLY NICE. THERE ARE A LOT OF US WANTING THE ANSWERS TO THOSE QUESTIONS, I REALLY CAN RELATE TO IT EVEN THOUGH IM STILL PRETTY YOUNG. <333TANYA<333 [This message has been edited by Tanya (edited 07-31-99).] |
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LAngel New Member
since 1999-07-29
Posts 3Littleton, CO USA |
This poem was weel thought out and written! I'm sure, that along with me, many teens feel exactly how you are feeling. Keep your head high and the excellent poems coming! |
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nicnac8 Junior Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 46New York, N.Y. USA |
that was a really nice poem. Good work! ------------- NIKa |
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Kiya Junior Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 31Kingston Springs,Tn.,U.S. |
Your composure was very deep. But can I ask everyone a question?--Even if we had all the answers that we ask for would'nt they contain questions within themselves. I mean in no way am I dowing your writing, You are very talented. Its just your poem Just makes me think--Do we really want the answers to the questions we ask. If we had all the answers what would be the point of life..??? Anyway, I really admire your poem-- it made me think. I like that. I commend you on it. ------------------ Kiya Nicole |
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Kiya Junior Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 31Kingston Springs,Tn.,U.S. |
sweet T I just wanted to make sure I didn't offend you. I am a teenager also and i ask a lot of the same questions. When I read your poem it just made me wonder If I myself want all the answers to my questions.Like your verse"are you destined to be alone after all?" See for me I would'nt want the answer to that- Because if i knew i wouldn't even try to find a companion, I'd just give up/ If I didn't know the answer I'd try to find it. Thats the point of life to me--trying to find the answers.. I just want you to know that your poem really made me think. I was by no means downing it. It was very well composed. They were all very true and realistic questions, Good job. |
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Sweet T Member
since 1999-06-14
Posts 64mesa, arizona maricopa |
Kiya No offence taken. As a fellow writer you have to be able to question everything. I am not looking for the answers, it would just be nice to not have to ask them all the time. To everyone else who commented thank you. All your words touch the pen inside my heart. LOL Sweet T |
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Starr_Scott Junior Member
since 1999-08-06
Posts 26Brownwood, Texas, USA |
Very good poem! I loved it. It really got me thinking about my situation. Liking someone for 4 years and knowing you have to wait until they fell the same way about you makes it even worse. Thank you again ------------------ |
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Sweet T Member
since 1999-06-14
Posts 64mesa, arizona maricopa |
Thank you. I am glad my poem helps you. That is all that matters. |
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