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Teen Poetry #1

She can't die!

Acid Angel
Junior Member

since 1999-07-25

Posts 17
Austin, TX, US

0 posted 1999-07-25 07:32 PM

She has tryed everthing..smoking to much
overdosing slicing her wrists her throat..
nothing seems to work,
why can't she just die and get it over with?
Is it because too many people love her?
No She does it too carefully..

Maybe deep inside her rage a little part of her wants to live, but not for long she tells herself..You brought this on, know you have to tell yourself everyday it was your fault..or is it your fault i cant die?

Her rage will always be her boss..she cant help that just like she cant help not dying.

Wet
Member

since 1999-07-25

Posts 60
Brentwood, Tn

1 posted 1999-07-25 08:50 PM

I think the person that you wrote about needs to be shown that there is more to live for.... I once was that person too, but then I found my love for music and love for poetry. Good poem!!

Acid Angel
Junior Member

since 1999-07-25

Posts 17
Austin, TX, US

2 posted 1999-07-25 08:55 PM

Thank You Wet. The person i was writing about was me. And i have been doing better. I know it wont happen anymore, because i finally stood up to my fear.

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