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Black Rain
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since 1999-07-19
Posts 60
California, USA

0 posted 1999-07-19 06:44 PM


the mind of whether or not to take in, is the question of the sea. an end to all your troubles? to be or not to be? the arms of fortune and good health, are all thrown very proud. but they that suffer the outrageous pain, are all found underground.

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Acid Angel
Junior Member
since 1999-07-25
Posts 17
Austin, TX, US
1 posted 1999-07-25 08:22 PM


your poem is really good, i love rhyming poems, yours are the best..full of thought and mind, you put your thoughts of computer for the world to see.

KEEP IT UP!

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