Teen Poetry #1 |
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Dear Tammi |
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Mike1sacks Member
since 1999-07-24
Posts 103Bklyn ny,usa |
Dear Tammi, close your eyes,tell me wat do you see do u see u and me I see us walking together,hand in hand in the city going about as we planed if you only knew the way that i feel can it be love,can it be real My eyes will open and then they close with you on my mind,but know1 knows to me u r day,to me u r night to me u r everything,everything right to me u r my sunshine,even my rain driving me crazy,but still keepin me sane you are my love,you make me complete every time i see u,my heart skips a beat now i must sleep,to dream of you and at the same time i hope u dream of me 2 ------------------ [email protected] |
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mike2sacks Junior Member
since 1999-07-29
Posts 18brooklyn ny |
fdf |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Not bad, my man, not bad at all. ------------------ Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings? DreamEvil© |
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Mike1sacks Member
since 1999-07-24
Posts 103Bklyn ny,usa |
thanx |
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Maitay Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 158Sisters,OR,USA |
That was such an awsome poem that touched my heart. That is exactly the way I feel. I have read many of your poems and truly love them, you are excedingly talented. Keep pumpin them out. Maitay Mirabel Litton [This message has been edited by Maitay (edited 08-01-99).] |
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Tanya Junior Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 43Brooklyn, NY, USA |
Thats us really really really nice, i liked it a lot. I think you should give it to her. <333Tanya<333 |
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Mike1sacks Member
since 1999-07-24
Posts 103Bklyn ny,usa |
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Mike1sacks Member
since 1999-07-24
Posts 103Bklyn ny,usa |
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Starr_Scott Junior Member
since 1999-08-06
Posts 26Brownwood, Texas, USA |
Once again great poem. Wish I had the guts to write a poem to the guy I like and also give to him. But in order to keep my sanity I think not. Where do you get your ideas because they sure are good. ![]() STARR "Never be afraid to express yourself but instead seize the day and have no regrets" ------------------ |
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Mike1sacks Member
since 1999-07-24
Posts 103Bklyn ny,usa |
sex |
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The Mike Sacks Member
since 1999-08-29
Posts 129brooklyn ny |
hey |
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