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Mike1sacks
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since 1999-07-24
Posts 103
Bklyn ny,usa

0 posted 1999-07-24 04:50 AM


Dear Tammi,
close your eyes,tell me wat do you see
do u see u and me
I see us walking together,hand in hand
in the city going about as we planed
if you only knew the way that i feel
can it be love,can it be real
My eyes will open and then they close
with you on my mind,but know1 knows
to me u r day,to me u r night
to me u r everything,everything right
to me u r my sunshine,even my rain
driving me crazy,but still keepin me sane
you are my love,you make me complete
every time i see u,my heart skips a beat
now i must sleep,to dream of you
and at the same time i hope u dream of me 2

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Mike1Sacks@aol.com

© Copyright 1999 Mike1sacks - All Rights Reserved
mike2sacks
Junior Member
since 1999-07-29
Posts 18
brooklyn ny
1 posted 1999-07-29 01:28 AM


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DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

2 posted 1999-07-29 06:25 AM


Not bad, my man, not bad at all.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©



Mike1sacks
Member
since 1999-07-24
Posts 103
Bklyn ny,usa
3 posted 1999-07-29 08:12 AM


thanx
Maitay
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since 1999-07-16
Posts 158
Sisters,OR,USA
4 posted 1999-08-01 10:49 PM


That was such an awsome poem that touched my heart. That is exactly the way I feel. I have read many of your poems and truly love them, you are excedingly talented. Keep pumpin them out.

Maitay Mirabel Litton

[This message has been edited by Maitay (edited 08-01-99).]

Tanya
Junior Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 43
Brooklyn, NY, USA
5 posted 1999-08-02 01:39 AM


Thats us really really really nice, i liked it a lot. I think you should give it to her.
<333Tanya<333

Mike1sacks
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since 1999-07-24
Posts 103
Bklyn ny,usa
6 posted 1999-08-02 08:33 PM


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Mike1sacks
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since 1999-07-24
Posts 103
Bklyn ny,usa
7 posted 1999-08-06 04:21 PM


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Starr_Scott
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since 1999-08-06
Posts 26
Brownwood, Texas, USA
8 posted 1999-08-06 04:56 PM


Once again great poem.
Wish I had the guts to write a poem to the guy I like and also give to him.
But in order to keep my sanity I think not.
Where do you get your ideas because they sure are good.

STARR

"Never be afraid to express yourself but instead seize the day and have no regrets"

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Mike1sacks
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since 1999-07-24
Posts 103
Bklyn ny,usa
9 posted 1999-08-11 04:55 AM


sex
The Mike Sacks
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since 1999-08-29
Posts 129
brooklyn ny
10 posted 1999-09-02 02:06 PM


hey
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