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Teen Poetry #1

mine

Addie Anne
Junior Member

since 1999-07-22

Posts 46
norman, oklahoma- usa

0 posted 1999-07-23 03:48 PM

sometimes i seem dead to you
barely breathing,
and defensless;
sometimes i feel that way
after your done with me.
you hate to look at me like this,
you know your the one who caused it all
and once i shead a tear
you can't cope,
you want to slap me.
you, you, you
it's all about you.
but the pain i feel is mine,
the thoughts i think are mine,
the anger towards you i feel is mine,
the hand i hold is mine.
i hurt sometimes, okay, all the time
and you think tomorrow should change all that
but sorrow doesn't evaporate so suddenly from inside.
the tension i feel is mine,
the lonelieness i feel is mine,
although it's caused by you.
the words i speak are mine,
the overcomeing of the situation is mine.
mine, mine , mine
this time it's all mine,
you can cause me the pain
but the recovery is mine.

*addie anne

Sweet T
Member

since 1999-06-14

Posts 64
mesa, arizona maricopa

1 posted 1999-07-27 02:39 PM

With every new poem I read of yours, the more I see a very powerful person. If time or space has its way I think the two of us with our pain could write the next award winning poem.
lol.Always.Sweet T

Addie Anne
Junior Member

since 1999-07-22

Posts 46
norman, oklahoma- usa

2 posted 1999-07-27 03:03 PM

i bet we could too:-) thanks for all your comments on my work. i'll read some of yours some time K?
addie

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