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melvin
New Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 5


0 posted 1999-07-23 09:11 AM


This is the story of your life
and the end of it is your death
and every word thats inbetween
is just a waste of breath

You paint your leather jacket
and it washes of in the rain
the more you cut your hair
the more it grows again
the patches you pin on yourself
fall of or start to rust
the less people you can trust

This is the story of your life
and the end of it is your death
and every word thats inbetween
is just a waste of breath

-subhumans
Stay out of order!! OI! OI!

[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 07-27-99).]

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pun83
Junior Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 26
FALMOUTH ,MA. U.S.A
1 posted 1999-07-24 12:05 PM


I DON'T KNOW MAN THAT WAS KINDA CRAPPY THE WAY YOU GO ON ABOUT DEATH IT IS JUST HEALTHY
Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
2 posted 1999-07-24 06:13 PM


Yo, Pun - It's the weekend - Go to the FAIR!!!

Olga
Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 152
Brooklyn, NY, USA
3 posted 1999-07-26 11:43 PM


That was a nice poem, it sounds like ur depressed, ive bin through da same thing. Dont worry be Happy :-)
bucky
New Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 9
falmoth,mass usa
4 posted 1999-07-27 09:03 AM


Be nice, guys...

[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 07-27-99).]

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