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murf1_00
Junior Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 20


0 posted 1999-07-20 05:51 PM


Why are they always right?
Why am I always wrong?
I look up to them and follow their lead
Yet I get in trouble for following them
They're supposed to be my teachers
Yet they make me feel stupid
Like I cant do anything right
I try so hard cause all I want is...
Their respect
Their admiration
Their love
Why does it seem I have none
Am I really that bad?
What have I done?
Maybe it's not them
Maybe I'm the one
Thats not right
Maybe I'm the bad one
Maybe I should leave
Maybe I should go
Give them what they really want

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Ashley2405
Junior Member
since 1999-07-18
Posts 28
West Columbia, South Carolina 29170
1 posted 1999-07-20 09:20 PM


wow i know exactly how you feel, sometimes i feel the same way. your poem has a great way of capturing these feelings.

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