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Letting go |
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neunagirl New Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 7Belton, MO U.S.A. |
I can't love you now but I can't let you go. I won't kiss you but we can't be alone. I want you in my bed, no one can do what you do. But no one would ever be as untrue to me as you. So I sit and think of you every day. But I can't pick up the phone, no way. It's time to say goodbye. I don't have time to listen to your lies. But no one can make me feel the way you can. I loved just to feel the gental touch of your hands. I love you and you know that I do. But can you say that you ever loved me too... Didn't think so, That's really why I'm letting you go. I can't love you knowing you don't love me. I guess now I can see that if you ever loved me I would wake up and it would all be a dream. |
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LucidLore New Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 4Southern CA |
This is great poetry.. Definetly a lot of feeling behind it... I have definetly been there... Good Job! ------------------ === Lucid Lore "For Every Love Letter That Is Written, There Is Another One Burnt" |
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Nuriphnos Junior Member
since 1999-07-18
Posts 21Philadelphia, PA USA |
I liked it very much. I know how it feels to be in a relationship where u r the only one giving the luv. Nice deep poem. It explained ur heart. L.L.L.L>Cole (Live, Love, & Let Love.) |
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