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jjsweets
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since 1999-07-18
Posts 18
albion,MI,usa

0 posted 1999-07-19 11:42 PM


A whirl of a blur,
things speed in a slur.
My head breaks and my heart aches,
for i know i will miss you every day i awake
The setting sun will rise on us both i know,
yet we will be far apart and can only dream of each other so.....
Untill then my sweetes dear,
i will awake every morning with no fear.
We will fly together and soar,
i will hold my breath for you and open doors
Forget me not, when you go away,
please, think of me and say:
" I will never forget you, you are my boy",
and i will cry, like a baby without a toy.
But, upon your return,
joy will show through me and burn,burn, burn
For i will be so happy
and maybe a little sappy.
But, youre my girl,
I'm you're boy, so slow down,
watch life, and dont let things go
down in a whirl.

- my girlfriend is going to college -

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* s.w.e.e.t.s *

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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
1 posted 1999-07-20 04:06 PM


Growing up and having people drift away is hard...I feel for you. A great poem.

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..And down from the eternal heavens comes fate's jewelled fingertips, it's magic flowing into awaiting souls..--Krista Knutson


*Krista Knutson*



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