Teen Poetry #1 |
Losing One of You |
Ashley2405 Junior Member
since 1999-07-18
Posts 28West Columbia, South Carolina 29170 |
We've known eachother for a while But never quite so well We started getting to know eachother And for you I quickly fell. I want to be with you More than you'll ever realize But I don't know how to tell you this Without having tears of pain fill my eyes. My friend still loves you After you broke up a while ago So I don't know just what to do I love you more than you know. Should I tell her my feelings for you And lose a really great friend? Or should I push my feelings aside And hope the pain will end? It's the toughest decision That I'll have to make, ever Either way I choose to go I'll lose one of you forever. I'm trapped between a friend and love What am I to do? When I found out you wanted to be with me It made me fall more in love with you. Love or friendship? Which do I choose? But either way I go now I'm losing one of you. ------------------ *})i({*Ash*})i({ |
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murf1_00 Junior Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 20 |
Great poem. I'll say I'm a guy but I've been in the same situation before myself and theres no real advice to give. They say friendship lasts forever but what if this love you feel is true? All I can say is keep the great emtion and feeling flowin. |
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Ashley2405 Junior Member
since 1999-07-18
Posts 28West Columbia, South Carolina 29170 |
thanks again. and thank god that i didn't have to lose one of them. actually i talked with my friend (the one in the poem) and she is surprisingly cool about it. me and mr. right are dating now, since july 11. ok getting emotional again! sorry bout that. ------------------ *})i({*Ash*})i({ |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
I've been in the a similar situation, with a similar result as yours. We are also dating now. ::smiles:: A wonderful job on capturing the feeling of fear of loosing one or the other. ------------------ ..And down from the eternal heavens comes fate's jewelled fingertips, it's magic flowing into awaiting souls..--Krista Knutson *Krista Knutson* |
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