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Ashley2405
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since 1999-07-18
Posts 28
West Columbia, South Carolina 29170

0 posted 1999-07-18 11:33 PM


We've known eachother for a while
But never quite so well
We started getting to know eachother
And for you I quickly fell.

I want to be with you
More than you'll ever realize
But I don't know how to tell you this
Without having tears of pain fill my eyes.

My friend still loves you
After you broke up a while ago
So I don't know just what to do
I love you more than you know.

Should I tell her my feelings for you
And lose a really great friend?
Or should I push my feelings aside
And hope the pain will end?

It's the toughest decision
That I'll have to make, ever
Either way I choose to go
I'll lose one of you forever.

I'm trapped between a friend and love
What am I to do?
When I found out you wanted to be with me
It made me fall more in love with you.

Love or friendship?
Which do I choose?
But either way I go now
I'm losing one of you.




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murf1_00
Junior Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 20

1 posted 1999-07-19 03:29 AM


Great poem. I'll say I'm a guy but I've been in the same situation before myself and theres no real advice to give. They say friendship lasts forever but what if this love you feel is true? All I can say is keep the great emtion and feeling flowin.
Ashley2405
Junior Member
since 1999-07-18
Posts 28
West Columbia, South Carolina 29170
2 posted 1999-07-20 12:16 PM


thanks again. and thank god that i didn't have to lose one of them. actually i talked with my friend (the one in the poem) and she is surprisingly cool about it. me and mr. right are dating now, since july 11. ok getting emotional again! sorry bout that.

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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
3 posted 1999-07-20 04:09 PM


I've been in the a similar situation, with a similar result as yours. We are also dating now. ::smiles:: A wonderful job on capturing the feeling of fear of loosing one or the other.

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..And down from the eternal heavens comes fate's jewelled fingertips, it's magic flowing into awaiting souls..--Krista Knutson


*Krista Knutson*



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