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Teen Poetry #1

Love

Black Rain
Member

since 1999-07-19

Posts 60
California, USA

0 posted 1999-07-19 06:19 PM

Love should be cherished, not abused.
Love should be offered, not refused.
Love is gentle, love is sweet.
Love should be pampered, it shouldn't be beat.
Love is around us, you just have to look.
Love is in writing, just look in a book.
Love is in everyone, deep in our heart.
Love is a feeling you'll know from the start.

murf1_00
Junior Member

since 1999-07-19

Posts 20

1 posted 1999-07-19 07:16 PM

I love it. You catch the main points of love simply and easily fer us to all understand. If only everyone shared your view.

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

2 posted 1999-07-19 08:28 PM

Excellent verse! Please continue with your efforts.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©

Black Rain
Member

since 1999-07-19

Posts 60
California, USA

3 posted 1999-07-19 09:12 PM

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"Each of us are angels with only one wing. And we can fly only by embracing each other."
- Luciano de Crescenzo

Black Rain
Member

since 1999-07-19

Posts 60
California, USA

4 posted 1999-07-24 10:53 PM

OOPS! thanks for replying everyone, it helps a lot to know there is so much support around.

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

5 posted 1999-07-25 12:41 PM

A simple, beautiful verse. Excellent, you have talent!

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*Krista Knutson*

"It's a crazy thing, fate has perfect wings..."-Deanna Carter

Mike1sacks
Member

since 1999-07-24

Posts 103
Bklyn ny,usa

6 posted 1999-07-25 02:29 AM

yofeh

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Mike1Sacks@aol.com

Acid Angel
Junior Member

since 1999-07-25

Posts 17
Austin, TX, US

7 posted 1999-07-25 07:41 PM

I congratulate you on your beautiful ability to let people see a true opinion through your poems, I love this poem. I'll send the word on to my friends. :

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