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Teen Poetry #1

Never-ending Pit

Talia
Junior Member

since 1999-07-06

Posts 25
Colorado Springs, CO, USA

0 posted 1999-07-17 06:11 PM

I feel like I'm on a downward spiral
In a never-ending pit
There is nothing for me to grab for
Nobody to give a shit

It seems as though if I keep falling
There is nothing left but death
But death, now there is something
And nothing is what's left

I've given all I have in struggle
In hopes of finding an end
But there are no hands reaching out for
The chance of saving a friend

I've reached as far as one can reach
But rejection made me retract
I've screamed as loud as one can scream
But my tears made me choke it back

What's left now but to give up
And go along for the ride
This pit may be never-ending
But at least I know I tried

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-Talia

[This message has been edited by Talia (edited 07-18-99).]

[This message has been edited by Talia (edited 07-30-99).]

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-07-17 09:22 PM

Very well done, thought provoking.

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Being paranoid is the biggest reason I'm still around to practice my paranoia.
DreamEvil©

Talia
Junior Member

since 1999-07-06

Posts 25
Colorado Springs, CO, USA

2 posted 1999-07-18 07:02 PM

Thank you for your kind words. They mean alot coming from someone who is such a wonderful poet.

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