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Teen Poetry #1

I lOvE yOu

Robert
Junior Member

since 1999-07-09

Posts 20
sunrise,fl,usa

0 posted 1999-07-16 12:18 PM

oh, look into my eyes,
look into my soul,
through you im crucified,
i've lost control,

I love you, i love you,

look at my hands,
scared and bruised,
look into my mind,
so confused,

im lost with out you,
i cant push these walls down,
mental pictures of you,
follow me around,

i love you, i love you,

let me sleep,
take this cold away,
i cant count shhep,
another day.

im alone without you,
i need you with me,
im lost without you,
cant you see?

[This message has been edited by Robert (edited 07-16-99).]

nikki1421
Junior Member

since 1999-07-15

Posts 15

1 posted 1999-07-16 12:36 PM

Thats a really great poem good job!

nikki1421
Junior Member

since 1999-07-15

Posts 15

2 posted 1999-07-16 12:36 PM

Thats a really great poem good job!

nikki1421
Junior Member

since 1999-07-15

Posts 15

3 posted 1999-07-16 12:37 PM

Thats a really great poem good job!

nikki1421
Junior Member

since 1999-07-15

Posts 15

4 posted 1999-07-16 12:38 PM

Thats a really great poem good job!

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