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nikki1421 Junior Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 15 |
It was night The sky was blue The wind was howling And the moon was new I had heard the sirens earlier that say The sound gives me goosebumps I pray that everyone will be safe from harm I kneel down and begin to pray I had no clue While I was busy at work The ambulence was at his house We thought It was just the flu But we were wrong And now i can't sleep or eat My best friend taken from me And all I have are memories from now on |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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mandamaywhoviay Junior Member
since 2009-01-02
Posts 12 |
Aw that's so sad! That poem really gave off a tone to it and it was a good one. It's good that you used some of those feelings, even if they really hurt, to make art like you did. |
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Zaineb Junior Member
since 2009-05-22
Posts 27Denmark |
That is soo sad ): i can really feel the pain, and the reader can not ignore it. it is soo good and it say much about the feeling of how it is to lose a friend I really enjoy it  |
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