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nikki1421
Junior Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 15


0 posted 1999-07-16 11:10 AM


I lie awake
Thinking about you
Wondering where you are
Then I wish upon a star
That I was there too.

I find myself daydreaming all the time
Wishing that you were still mine
Hoping it would be the same again.

Then it all becomes so clear
You were always distant and never near
She has your heart now and she had it then
Now I realize that what we had was...
JUST A GAME OF PRETEND.


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Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
1 posted 2007-11-15 03:56 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

mandamaywhoviay
Junior Member
since 2009-01-02
Posts 12

2 posted 2009-01-02 11:32 AM


Very nice ending! Your poem is really relatable and I like that.
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