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Augchic711
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since 1999-06-17
Posts 80
O'Fallon, IL, USA

0 posted 1999-06-17 03:35 PM


No one asks for my opinion
No one asks me if I care
No one asks me
they just stand and stare

Standing there looking
Standing there laughing
Fingers pointed, eyes engaged
They're eyes piercing my being
They're eyes looking me through

No one asks me how I am
No one asks me what to do
No one asks me if I care

They just stand there and
STARE!!!
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Dusk Treader
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since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187
St. Paul, MN
1 posted 1999-06-19 02:50 PM


I know how that feels to be left on the outskirts, to be ignored and left there alone. Good job!
Elizabeth
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2 posted 1999-06-19 04:19 PM


I think being ignored is one of the most hurtful things one can endure-if they can endure.
invertigo18
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since 1999-06-14
Posts 53
Prairieville, LA., USA
3 posted 1999-06-23 01:23 PM


I know the feeling. People can be cruel. It was great.

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Luke Cakalic

Augchic711
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since 1999-06-17
Posts 80
O'Fallon, IL, USA
4 posted 1999-06-24 01:52 AM


Thank you all for your kind words i hate being on the outside sometimes it's like it is a whole new world from there i'm glad it isn't just me and thank you for your opinions i look forward to hearing ur work as well!

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Thomas Downey
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 2
Bradenton,FL U.S.A
5 posted 1999-06-27 04:22 PM


I really injoyed your poem..I know exactly how you feel..Right now i feel as if im the one thats bein left out..The past several months have been really hard on me and im just now being to deal with and get over being that person..The one that is not thought of...Like i said,i know how you feel and in time things to get better..I hope to read more of your poems sometime and if you want check out my work..
Augchic711
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since 1999-06-17
Posts 80
O'Fallon, IL, USA
6 posted 1999-06-28 01:49 AM


Thank you Thomas I appreciate that I am not alone and I hope that I do hear more replies to my other poetry more is found in the open poetry forum. And I hope to hear your poems thank you!

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