Teen Poetry #1 |
Eyes on me |
Augchic711 Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 80O'Fallon, IL, USA |
No one asks for my opinion No one asks me if I care No one asks me they just stand and stare Standing there looking Standing there laughing Fingers pointed, eyes engaged They're eyes piercing my being They're eyes looking me through No one asks me how I am No one asks me what to do No one asks me if I care They just stand there and STARE!!! *******augchic711******* |
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Dusk Treader
Moderator
Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
I know how that feels to be left on the outskirts, to be ignored and left there alone. Good job! |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I think being ignored is one of the most hurtful things one can endure-if they can endure. |
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invertigo18 Member
since 1999-06-14
Posts 53Prairieville, LA., USA |
I know the feeling. People can be cruel. It was great. ------------------ Luke Cakalic |
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Augchic711 Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 80O'Fallon, IL, USA |
Thank you all for your kind words i hate being on the outside sometimes it's like it is a whole new world from there i'm glad it isn't just me and thank you for your opinions i look forward to hearing ur work as well! *******Augchic711******* |
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Thomas Downey New Member
since 1999-06-25
Posts 2Bradenton,FL U.S.A |
I really injoyed your poem..I know exactly how you feel..Right now i feel as if im the one thats bein left out..The past several months have been really hard on me and im just now being to deal with and get over being that person..The one that is not thought of...Like i said,i know how you feel and in time things to get better..I hope to read more of your poems sometime and if you want check out my work.. |
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Augchic711 Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 80O'Fallon, IL, USA |
Thank you Thomas I appreciate that I am not alone and I hope that I do hear more replies to my other poetry more is found in the open poetry forum. And I hope to hear your poems thank you! *******Augchic711******* |
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