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SoccerZ14
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since 1999-06-27
Posts 3
Lake Worth, Florida. USA

0 posted 1999-06-27 01:39 PM


hey everyone, I'd like you to read my poem I wrote for my brother

Brother, your gone!

Your gone
what can I say
in my mind you will never fade away

your time had come
and it made sad
and I wonder if it will get better

Do you look down at me in the night
Do you see my candle burning so bright

the candle I burn reminds me of you
For my love that is so true
Somedays my life is so blue

I cant believe your dead
but you'll always live in my head

remember the jokes I played on you
and you'd come back and play one on me to
You were a great brother man
without you I can barely stand

Your gone
what can I say
in my mind you will never fade away

its time for me to go
hope your having fun up there
and remember I will always care

thanx, Zack

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abra-cadabra
Member
since 1999-06-21
Posts 75
Florissant, Missouri, USA
1 posted 1999-06-27 07:52 PM


oh wow. i'm starting to cry. that was really sweet. i'm sorry about your brother. i know what it's like to lose someone close to you. and yet another is about to leave me. i really liked this one, though.

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Jamie
~songs are only poems with music~

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