Teen Poetry #1 |
Brother, your gone! |
SoccerZ14 New Member
since 1999-06-27
Posts 3Lake Worth, Florida. USA |
hey everyone, I'd like you to read my poem I wrote for my brother Brother, your gone! Your gone what can I say in my mind you will never fade away your time had come and it made sad and I wonder if it will get better Do you look down at me in the night Do you see my candle burning so bright the candle I burn reminds me of you For my love that is so true Somedays my life is so blue I cant believe your dead but you'll always live in my head remember the jokes I played on you and you'd come back and play one on me to You were a great brother man without you I can barely stand Your gone what can I say in my mind you will never fade away its time for me to go hope your having fun up there and remember I will always care thanx, Zack |
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abra-cadabra Member
since 1999-06-21
Posts 75Florissant, Missouri, USA |
oh wow. i'm starting to cry. that was really sweet. i'm sorry about your brother. i know what it's like to lose someone close to you. and yet another is about to leave me. i really liked this one, though. ------------------ Jamie ~songs are only poems with music~ |
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