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Teen Poetry #1

Why I loved your eyes...

Ashlie693
Junior Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 25

0 posted 1999-07-13 06:49 PM

You always wondered why I loved your eyes so much....

They sparkled like a starry night. The kind of night that you return to childhood just for a few moments, and wish on a star that the one you love, will be the one you love for all eternity.

They were bluer than the bluest ocean. The ocean that held as many secrets underneath as you do. So many unsolved mysteries...so much to wonder about.

They were your other mouth. The mouth that didnt speak with words, but just a gaze that seemed to last forever. It said much more than your lips would ever have to.

And that, my love, is why I loved your eyes so much.

*Dedicated to my ex, whom I believe will someday be my husband, even if now, we are not together*

Iceman
Junior Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 11
E-falmouth, Ma, Falmouth

1 posted 1999-07-14 09:05 AM

I really enjoy how you used the ocean i love the ocean many cause of the wonderus creatures in it. I live near the ocean and walk on the beach when i can i love seeing whales and the moon shinning on the water

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