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Teen Poetry #1

passion

Lovemaster
New Member

since 1999-07-13

Posts 3
E-falmouth, MA/ US

0 posted 1999-07-13 08:59 AM

I stand in a open feild
with a open mind
with a thought that makes me yeild
a thought that puts me in a bind
I look at a flower it reflects the earths power
I look at the sky
it reflects only lies
to be clear at one time
and nasty at another
These reflections come from my mind
not yours, not hers, or my brothers

Iceman
Junior Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 11
E-falmouth, Ma, Falmouth

1 posted 1999-07-14 09:07 AM

Your peom is the greatest peom in the world you have such talent that i would be willing to pay big money to use your poem

[This message has been edited by Iceman (edited 07-14-99).]

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