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^^^^^^This Pain^^^^^^

Aprender
Junior Member

since 1999-06-22

Posts 40
Rohill, NJ, USA

0 posted 1999-07-11 11:23 PM

My feeling of sorrow
Burns from deep within
Crying, yearning for my heart to heal
This pain,
Which no pill can heal
This pain,
That shatters the soul
This pain,
Which my body cannot hold
It travels like a virus
Growing worse with every passing second
Showing in whatever I do
I can't even hold a conversation
Without hearing and feeling this pain
Eventually it will disappear
No longer to be heard from
And a new feeling will arise
One of warmth and glow
But I'll never forget the pain
That aches me now
Even though I know it will vanish,
But I still wonder, how?

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

1 posted 1999-07-12 12:12 PM

Wonderful, Aprender. I understand this piece quite a bit. Keep up the great work!

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*Krista Knutson*

katrina
Junior Member

since 1999-06-20

Posts 41
White Bear Lake, Minnesota, U.S.A

2 posted 1999-07-12 12:35 PM

I have felt this pain that you wrote about. It is a really great poem, nice job!

JuliEta65
New Member

since 1999-07-13

Posts 5
e.falmouth MA usa

3 posted 1999-07-13 09:10 AM

good job! I can relate to this.

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