Teen Poetry #1 |
the world |
pun83 Junior Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 26FALMOUTH ,MA. U.S.A |
this is such a cruel world it makes you kinda think of how people work and do how really low they sink the world is such an erie place what are we to do to think of all the creeps and things it is like a pile of poo the world is such a pretty place lets look and see of all the creations and beautiful things of what we all should be |
||
© Copyright 1999 pun83 - All Rights Reserved | |||
Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Pretty good start..... I expect to see some pretty good work out of you.... [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 07-07-99).] |
||
nick New Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 8 |
it was funny |
||
pun83 Junior Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 26FALMOUTH ,MA. U.S.A |
that was a good job habeeb |
||
habeebpetersen@hotmail Junior Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 28falmouth MA usa |
thanx.......i guess |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |