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Teen Poetry #1

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Seeking77
Junior Member

since 1999-07-09

Posts 24
Irvine california

0 posted 1999-07-11 08:17 PM

All I really wanted was a friend that I could kiss,
Someone to rely on,
Whom everday I'd miss,
We wouldn't have to say it,
Everyone would know,
Someone to be myself with,
Never having staged a show,
Someone I could change with,
Falling deep in love,
Giving all I had to give,
Never giving up,
Sharing all of me, showing him our future he still has yet to see.

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JeNn AnNe >:)

Joshua
Junior Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 43
phoenix,az,usa

1 posted 1999-07-11 08:28 PM

Hey, me too!!!
once again a superb job

Thank You,

--Joshua--

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"Poetry is an orphan of scilence. The words never quite equal the experiece behind them." *Charles Simic

"The poet is the priest of the invisable." *Wallace Stevens*

Seeking77
Junior Member

since 1999-07-09

Posts 24
Irvine california

2 posted 1999-07-11 08:33 PM

Thanks Josh for all the replys to my poetry...I enjoy waiting for your responses...Thanks again and I hope to chat again soon...I like your poems just as much.

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JeNn AnNe >:)

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

3 posted 1999-07-11 09:19 PM

Wonderful job, Seeking77!! I can relate to this quite a lot. Thanx for the beautiful work.

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*Krista Knutson*

Seeking77
Junior Member

since 1999-07-09

Posts 24
Irvine california

4 posted 1999-07-11 10:26 PM

Thanx Alwe...you're a sweetie...and I enjoy all of ur work as well...Thank you!

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