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Teen Poetry #1

Lord of Lonely

invertigo18
Member

since 1999-06-14

Posts 53
Prairieville, LA., USA

0 posted 1999-06-16 07:17 PM

In this prison I silently weep.
Forever tortured in my own deep.
Can anyone feel as deep as I do?
Maybe you.
Can anyone pierce my lonely through?
Only you.

So take the lance and stab it deep.
Into my lonliest of keeps.
Into the chasm of our great divide.
In which I can no longer hide.
A beauty as yours can't be ignored
That's why I've been so galantly floored.
In reaching out for an untouched thing
Somehow these words of deep I sing.

For I am the lord of lonely.

The love of you is pain for me
For I don't know if we can be.
And tomorrow is a day without you.

Our worlds seem a universe apart.
And now its time for me to start.
On the winding journey to your heart.
So wish me luck and godspeed too
So that I may be one of the few
To have the priveledge of loving you.

Are you as lonely as me?
Make a wish on star number three.
Cleanse my loneliness with the charm while on earth.
For you know that I have loved you since birth.

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Luke Cakalic

Alwye

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Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

1 posted 1999-06-16 09:27 PM

ooh, very good! And I'd say your vocabulary isn't to shabby....

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*Krista Knutson*

Dusk Treader

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Senior Member

since 1999-06-18

Posts 1187
St. Paul, MN

2 posted 1999-06-18 04:32 PM

What a magnificent job Luke... I believe I can understand that poem.. I have to agree with Alwyne... You have a none to shabby vocabulary.

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