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The Ride Of A Lifetime
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The Ride Of A Lifetime |
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Joshua Junior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 43phoenix,az,usa |
Others call it a relationship I'm not sure how to define it I, myself would call it a ride. It began so great, With me asking you out on that oh so wonderful date. Your extravagant beauty your superb personality And how could i forget those spectacular lips on mine As we got to Know each other better I let my humors side fly And you shot it down like a clay pigeon Now the ride was at its climax You barking commands at me And i following along seemingly unwithered It was a mutual thing, Well at least between me and our peers I broke it off and you took it bad Spreading rumors about me that were realy bad I owe you a thanks for taking me on the emotional ride of a lifetime ------------------ "Poetry is an orphan of scilence. The words never quite equal the experiece behind them." *Charles Simic "The poet is the priest of the invisable." *Wallace Stevens* |
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Joshua Junior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 43phoenix,az,usa |
This one's for anyone who has been in a situation like this! ------------------ "Poetry is an orphan of scilence. The words never quite equal the experiece behind them." *Charles Simic* "The poet is the priest of the invisable." *Wallace Stevens* "I don't write poetry for me or about my experiences, I rely on others for that. I write poetry for others." *Me* |
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Charlie Junior Member
since 1999-07-09
Posts 11australia |
I thought it was heaps good and i am greatful that i haven't been in a situation like this before ------------------ lov' charlotte (or charlie) |
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