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aramena New Member
since 1999-07-03
Posts 9USA |
A screaching laughter pierces the dark silence. Footsteps of three small children pouciate on the floor above. Another pair of feet follow closely behind. You can feel the walls tremble with every deep breath. In and out. The blood trickles down the ceiling and fingers grab the walls hoping not tofall. The sound of bones breaking echos through the house. The silence as three bodies fall down the steps and one heart beats faintly. |
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Seeking77 Junior Member
since 1999-07-09
Posts 24Irvine california |
What exactly is this poetry about?? An earthquake? |
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princezz New Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 8Brighton, MI, USA |
i don't think it's about an earthquake becuz if it was why didn't the fourth set of feet fall down the stairs. Were the children killed or is it just the reality of abusive households?? |
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